Sunday, October 12, 2008

गजल


अमृत नै रोप्दा पनि अमृत फल फलेन हजुर
ढाल्यौं बाहिरी तानाशाहा आफू भित्रकै ढलेन हजुर ।

समानताका कुराहरु डिनर लञ्जसँगै खायौं
गोलीको घाउमा डण्डा बस्र्यो हाम्रो पानी चलेन हजुर ।

टुटे पहाड भनिएका झुके देउता बन्नेहरु
बरफ बन्छु भन्छ आगो यथास्थिति गलेन हजुर ।

चियाउँदै छन् दुलैबाट आधा जलेका साँपहरु
हाम्रा सपना जल्नथाले बेथिति यो जलेन हजुर ।

कहाँ सक्छन् भोकै बस्न बरु बिक्छन् ठूलाघरे
बरु काटिए हाम्रा हात कसैको पाउ मलेन हजुर ।

13 comments:

सिकारु said...

bhawana ji.niraasa hunu pardaina sabai kura ko din hunchha ek din tapai harmra sapana haru pani sakara hune chana.any way blog suru garnu bhayeko maa bhadhai ra yesari nai bhawanaka bhawaharu padhirahana pau.la

wosti nuwakote said...

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नाकिमा said...

उत्कृष्ट व्यङ्ग्य !

kapil said...

Namaskar vawana jee, hajurko gajal ramro 6. ma yo gajal mero programme maa bajau6u.
aanjhi ramro gajalharu leknu hola


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Shiva Prakash said...

नदि किनारका भक्तिनिहरुले जस्तै
लाखौपल्ट नुहाएका छन् भान्साका भाडाहरुले
तर कहिल्य मुक्त हुन सकेका छैनन्
भावनाजी,
तपाइँका भावनाहरूसँग मेरो मनको मिनल भइरहोस ।
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arjun kafle said...

bhawana g gajal ramro lagyo .yasari hares kanu hudai hai .des le aaj tapai jasta youth ko khoji gare ko 6 .kina niras ni ke hi gharna hami pani 6u. hat ma hat milau ki na sana tina kura ma aaljine ni .tara aafnu ghajal ko mithas dina nachhunu aani malai mail arjun.kafle41@gmail.com ma gharna pani

shrawan said...

bhawana ji tapai ko kalam nikai shasakta 6 tapai ko gajal nikai ramro lagyo aru ramro lekhne prayash ga nu hola

Priya said...

Bhawana...............gajal ma matra ho ki Athartha nai ho.............
Daraunu pardai na palo aau6a hai miss

Gokul Paudel said...
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Gokul Paudel said...

जसरी पनि अमृत फल फलाउनुपर्छ अब
भित्रैदेखि तानाशाही ढलाउनुपर्छ अब

के पो गर्न नसकिएला हामीजस्ता मिलेपछि ?
सबैको पानी भान्सातिर चलाउनुपर्छ अब ।

टुट्नेहरु टुट्दै जाउन, साहस फेरि बटुलेर
यथास्थिति चिन्तनहरु गलाउनुपर्छ अब

दिनेछैनौं हामी अब साँपलाई मुन्टो उठाउन
जरैसित बेथितिलाई जलाउनुपर्छ अब

ठूलाघरे सानाघरे खोलाखेत पुर्याएर
तिनैलाई हाम्रा पाउ मलाउनुपर्छ अब
By Shiva Sasmit

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